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Anel Hamersma's avatar

Deeply related to the specificity of so much of that.

Jamie Holland's avatar

I’m so glad. Very much appreciate you reading this!

Adia Bali's avatar

The specificity of this memory, those exact details about the cheese-baked olives and the Chablis, makes the violation hit so differently. What gets me is how you captured that collective silence that protected the adults in the room. It's unsettling to read how "just what happened to pretty girls" was presented as inevitable rather than wrong. Your willingness to reckon with that particular blindness feels important.

Jamie Holland's avatar

@Adia Bali Thank you. I very much appreciate you reading. I realize girls grow up differently and not everyone had this experience but in my mind, looking back on those years, girls did not stand up for themselves (some did, of course) and the males could do whatever they desired. We were definitely blinded by the culture.

Riamu A's avatar

Loved this! It really let me see into that time of life.

Jamie Holland's avatar

It was a different time! Thanks so much for reading and welcome to Substack!

Betsy Morrell's avatar

Another resonant piece. I was there with the narrator all the way.

Jamie Holland's avatar

thank you, Betsy!!xoxoxo

Ron Wetherington's avatar

Beautiful writing; the very meaning of angst!

Jamie Holland's avatar

Thank you so much for reading, Ron.

Katie's avatar

Absolutely loved this one

Jamie Holland's avatar

This means so much! Thank you, Katie. xo

Rebecca Barry's avatar

Gorgeous.